【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 l* k$ y# X* R% K/ a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 l$ ~9 ]; v5 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( C5 V% B- @6 J2 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ R  Q, e" D/ C& A2 [Seeing the sky content with its love
8 P7 ^; B2 j# EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 \3 U$ d/ H/ J- {+ ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, K: r& o+ q4 l) V( lI love you I love you with all my heart
- l5 K. Q- `  [8 V2 y* y! l- DNothing can compare to my love
/ a1 W5 |8 d7 aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! u  f, r; |, u& y; cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 o# h. d% E8 n0 T% `3 P2 A! |5 |With such a tongue as yours,
3 a) z9 T: \& ^/ G! K$ f7 ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' N* b7 @- B7 E+ r- }1 Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 I2 M: t% v) M( z5 W9 _! Q! o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. o, Q: I8 C1 N! x3 r- \4 ^; [7 @0 ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& ?% J: J* b! `& |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 F" `; G$ P. K3 Z/ M) ]4 c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 B0 _) K  e8 ?' D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 f/ J4 c: g9 G5 _<P>你无需担心</P>
7 H- W1 O! m3 t, ]2 d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: m% e: S2 V; [2 f3 A; I5 q9 a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' g& f+ H1 e; ~% {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 `7 _, K+ F) @3 ?* E+ z7 q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* `1 ]/ q" X# L* W/ T$ A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! v( e; h( p1 u- q: y* y4 R1 Z- ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- J: K8 K8 v" ?! e5 C! ~4 Q* m+ `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 G$ }% T& w- @. f& b" }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 T% ^, V, x: x4 L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 L5 l6 \1 Z) p4 {/ Q' D/ ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: d. p, i5 K; O9 E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 _# z& M$ a' @6 m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 m; \/ m7 }/ A  \% E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" d# e3 M& f" s5 X6 ]6 k3 t8 g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 k" f  @, U0 u) T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 N6 r- @. ?) v6 u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 r# B; K: o  v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ R8 k" x; k( I9 h* }! [& F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 H: n9 f7 e# O& e0 ^: T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* O2 i5 T% _# ^# ^' h9 Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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/ i7 ~2 K2 C6 i  Q1 `4 I4 p, b' t+ p我请你剖开它
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' P! [/ y, \# u3 q4 Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% Q; l: G1 K) |  U. A; Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>