【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
6 y! u# p% b' H  M, l; t( W. WThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" m5 |0 H# n3 W0 n& S/ OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
; ^* q5 g5 Y+ t( L* a8 n$ _We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& r; B6 U% U( s' [( _If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 ^8 O3 h2 {2 HI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
# J$ N9 L' _5 Z2 F) U1 k! YWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 U) m1 i" X* fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) w% ~/ X* `! C% ]Can I entrust it to you?
/ C$ M' ^4 q3 i) U8 ~" {% wEntrust my love within your heart
  q$ e/ r' q7 _* b, ]Love… just the word love
( q, O, n% K5 L! X8 g. KWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 ~; N& A( M  ]! ]  I' }I want to confess that I love you,
* T+ X$ a4 k2 W7 qBut I never did
% s1 K' k/ m5 C% l8 b! A) {' OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ x0 h" R' f3 K+ d6 b6 QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' v; d# ?5 G- Y( K# a9 K" cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 @/ t7 ?- g: e8 m& sEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
/ n0 q& `. T9 H8 \. L6 jEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 h. l6 Q, b: V: G" K0 p. [<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 L% z9 Z1 _  u: D<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 ], V8 P" F' G. J: q- J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) o- C8 G, u8 k8 L<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* h# _$ q* O$ f' h<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 ]7 N7 T$ m) e" }0 n9 m<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 ~% A4 c$ Y  b( {( _( u& P  S" h<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" [. S/ J4 R6 l3 g<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* r: e# k! E$ t" V6 ^0 Z<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! d& j6 K4 n+ H% Y0 Y# c" M* r  |4 y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 N2 F( T1 `; a, D<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  j) ^- n& B: E% k( }4 ^* k# t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 [5 ^; ~2 C' I: n<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
  P4 u9 l2 K. p$ }<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( ^, m; e; a5 H7 g) d$ \) [<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  P, S, {* L+ Y1 A  B" p4 e: y! ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ j5 Y# D0 H% m! g; v& V1 B; q8 q0 ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. `+ j1 e  d' H( f- L4 ]1 @  f2 l$ D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: [) K8 m" h: w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! U3 h0 t. ?3 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ T3 |! C9 [6 h" S. r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- j3 f, _1 @# n/ J% @. f6 R$ M' V<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 W+ U5 y/ C$ c- B- F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
& s8 [6 N7 {1 \3 ?6 u<P>但我不会 </P>
5 o# s. N( [9 t" n1 _2 m<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# H6 c' V! U0 j, F" S  n7 K8 ?. L<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 ]( |% J9 J1 R' y, @' ]<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  D6 v" s( l1 ]' j4 X+ n8 `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% l7 |1 t: G, y  h% A; {4 y1 d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ d$ d  H/ s2 ~  X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 L0 S$ a2 \# \/ {; {& b, J<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- i, @2 V9 B3 j' O: y" i" ^这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! e0 x6 H% f7 z' }<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>