【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: F9 O, q  I# v! HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 d6 `" O2 W$ @+ w. G% r% E* l/ p6 QYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 Y8 j3 L3 Q1 Z) ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' e) u: z& W( c! f% A- K* Z5 V6 sI want so much to see inside your heart
1 a4 H+ i5 R- _3 d. RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 P5 o# ?5 ?/ k$ _3 n) TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! M' g* c( o' ?/ B) o  bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# X- V" G' ~0 L% v" }/ MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# C  A0 Q( m  I# c& H% g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( n& ^: X8 l' P9 l$ W$ F9 Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 R! g0 L' }6 |  j4 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% B' m3 ]' _- Q$ `- }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, ]" T: Z% w0 q( `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 H! ]5 U5 W8 d8 f) _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 g8 ?0 ?6 ~$ r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% E; S& v7 M- ~0 l0 r- N, {. G<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# c' E- q: ]1 h+ V* H. h+ q$ ~* y1 _1 N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& G$ z8 `% m9 m3 M- `2 i6 L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 C; R8 o& S2 N: x7 @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 a7 e! L2 Q! v4 q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: Y1 k: P& f8 k: u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 V5 D% M% |6 e7 w  R! c1 Z: u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: j1 O1 T. X2 l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; J; A  K# o* R* i6 h0 Z9 b2 i0 n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ c; o8 W1 B7 {/ W! B* D0 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ [4 l# l- p* k9 S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 ^+ B3 Z2 ~& v+ K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% X9 w/ [( D% \* X5 o/ s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 V/ F7 [$ ~/ I% ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 _- t7 w1 {; G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 w- Q3 G! {5 T' K" P* n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: {2 s0 E/ t3 l. @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 ]  d$ T6 c( P5 x$ T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. p% _9 E2 ]. R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>